Release notes v0.23b - "Movie Night Reloaded"


Part Deux of being forced to watch Avatar. Fun, right?

This update features the Tyler and Emmett "dates." Remember, you can only dominate Emmett or submit to Tyler. They are both locked in their respective roles.

If you're having trouble accessing their dates, go back to Chapter IV when Marky has you cornered in the bathroom. Choose the pink option to ask Tyler for help (for Tyler's path) or the blue option (for Emmett's path).

I also went back to improve the writing of the prologue and chapter I. I have grown as a writer since starting this project, so I wanted to rephrase sentences and add extra descriptors. The story itself remains unchanged. I'll tackle chapters II to IV in later updates.

Aaand I changed the school art for the 100th time. Yes, I'm fickle. The other one was too joyful and saturated. The building's supposed to be weathered and depressing, surrounded by an overgrown garden. Now the image reflects that.

Lastly, I messed around with font installation. The new font makes the text all cool and stylish without ruining readability (sans serif is king.)

What's new:
• Movie Night (Tyler Date);
• Movie Night (Emmett Date);
• Better writing in the Prologue and Chapter I;
• Updated summary;
• New school art (again);
• UI and font changes.

Files

reform-school-0.23b - mega.zip 1.5 MB
Jun 04, 2023

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Hi! Big fan. I’m so sorry about your chronic pain and I know that it will be a while until the next update but can the next update be the date with Marky! ❤️  Also do you have an estimated time for it’s release?

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[The other one was too joyful and saturated. The building's supposed to be weathered and depressing, surrounded by an overgrown garden]

bro this is the most joyful and welcoming school I have seen in my depressed life

Also why not use same AI art in different parts of the school it will be nice to have same images here and there 

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I don't like to lean on images to do my descriptive work for me. If I'm relying on images, then the text is not good enough.

Plus, I generated over a hundred images of the school building to reach one I deemed good enough. I don't think I could invest that much time into every room lol

I had an idea do create a different image every beginning of a chapter, just to give a glimpse of what's coming next. You know, like the Harry Potter books and other ones have. I might still do that if the AI does a good enough job and it doesn't take forever.


PS: if this school is welcoming and joyful, I'm scared to know the places you're been at.

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You have no idea how happy I was when I saw the update, I love Reform School, I'm obsessed with Tyler and Marky.  Please don't stop writing!

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I don't plan to stop ♥ I'm just slow!

MOAR marky coming next update.

thanks!