Okie teensy issue; I played this game last night and i thought that Marky was a really cute name, so I said it over and over again to myself... and then remembered that it's also the name of a bus company near me.
so yeah i'm attracted to buses now (ps. I really love your game)
I love your Tyler and Marky so much. And I love to have MC "dominate" them too. Since you confirm Tyler is a hard rock, I have been daydreaming about MC Uno-reversing Marky. MC would love Marky back in the same way Marky loves him, or even more intense <3. The scene when MC returned to their room after injured Marky then kinda 'touched' him, it feels like ecstasy to me... Ahh
To think like that, I don't know if I am deranged or whatever. But one can always dream.
Yeah, Tyler is only a dom. He'd rather die than sub for someone. As for the chapter where MC starts to dominate Marky, it'll happen in the next update. I mean, you won't get to go all the way in the first time, but it'll be the beginning of it.
We're all deranged here, I'm the most deranged of them all, writing this shit lol
Hi! Big fan. I’m so sorry about your chronic pain and I know that it will be a while until the next update but can the next update be the date with Marky! ❤️ Also do you have an estimated time for it’s release?
I know that all characters are bullies and I usually hate bullies as I was bullied myself as a kid (but I knew what I was getting into when I started playing this game!) and out of all of them, Marky is the most typical bully... The bully that is likely familiar to all of us who were bullied.
So why the heck do I like Marky so much lol?
And what's with that hidden almost sweet (and fucked up) side he has? I was shocked when I realized that I found him endearing at one point (when he tried to be nice to MC so that he wouldn't run away again, lol), what the heck is wrong with me XD I legit wanna romance him, but I'm aware this game isn't gonna be very romantic so I'm not gonna complain.
That being said, it's a good game, I'm really looking forwards to the updates!
I was heavily bullied growing up and turned into an adult who's drawn to toxic, abusive and bullying men. So, I understand how you feel.
Marky can be nice and borderline romantic if he gets his way. But, remember, he's abusive, so he'll turn on you on a dime, as soon as you do anything wrong, and snap back into evil mode.
I signed up, purely because this game is really good. I completed it (to where it is at the moment) quiet quickly. Wish there was more, but i do appreciate your hard work. By the way the Discord invite isnt working :(
Shane. He's introduced during Haruki's date @ movie night. He's not a main character and won't have a route or anything, but he's important in Haruki's storyline.
uh is there any way to turn the portraits off? i don't like how they look like (full grown adults despite still beig in school) and would like to imagine them myself
If you really want to see the game without them, I guess you can download the game and delete the avatars manually from the folder. It'll break the image. It'll look weird but no portraits.
hi this the first time i comment on a game I just wanted to say that this game is amazing i must have played it like 10 times now my favorite character is marky I found him to be honest by far the best character in the game i hope u add more stuff about him + thx for this amazing game
Marky is arguably the most important character in the game. His "date" is not coming in the next update but he appears in both the Tyler and the Emmett dates.
Hey, I'm sorry to bother, but the discord link offered in the game isn't working and I think it may have expired. If that's not the case then I apologize, but I thought I'd bring it up just in case.
He's not straight. He's figuring himself out, in self-denial, going through gay guilt. A lot of gays feel like this growing up, I certainly did. So his narration is going to reflect said denial.
Uh... how old is the MC? If he's over 18 he's had plenty of time to figure things out...
This is absolutely not relatable to me whatsoever... to the point that I could not even imagine the possibility of it and just assumed he is straight... So, in any case, this game is definitely not for me. Can't put myself in the MC's shoes because I cannot comprehend whatever he's feeling.
Uh yeah, plenty of gay men are in the closet... what does that have to do with anything?
How the fuck can I use empathy to see something I have no knowledge of? What the fuck? You are insane.
And yes, I definitely have it all figured out. Not hard when, you know, sexual attraction is an involuntary physical response that does not require figuring out. Literally all you need to do is not be paralyzed. But I dunno, maybe you are paralyzed.
Wow, you're really toxic. I was questioning well into my 20's because what society was telling me I should feel as bi wasn't what I was feeling at all. Who are you to say how people should navigate this? Who are you to judge how others navigate this?
they don't mean you in particular for being unable to understand how the MC feels and how comfortable he is with his sexuality, everyone here is glad you have yourself figured out and we hope you stay in a situation where you can be yourself openly, but you are not every gay person. a lot of gay men and women don't realize they like the same gender until very late in life because of how they were raised or who raised them or who they were raised around. back when I was a minor I constantly thought that I knew nothing about myself because I was a minor and that what I was interested in might change when I grew up and or I might be straighter than a needle, spoiler alert, I never did, and also on the main topic about why most M/M games have "straight" MC is so it can relatable to those who still don't know themselves and wouldn't mind exploring via real life experience, or virtual ones. some games ignore it because it's not everyone, some games add it because it's not everyone.
It's really cool that you've got it all figured out and we're all seriously happy for you - and we support that! No one should feel guilty or scared because of their sexuality, but unfortunately so many of us still are, due to the way we grew up, things we were taught or people we were around.
But what you wrote is so narrow-minded!
"If he's over 18 he's had plenty of time to figure things out", seriously? Do you believe that, like, by the age of 18, you gotta have yourself figured out? That's so wrong, because 18 is so young and you're basically just starting to explore life freely. Like, I believed I was asexual until not so long ago and it took me so much time to accept that and to stop trying to force myself to change. Only to realize in my middle twenties that I'm, well, not so asexual. And I'm STILL not even sure where I fit exactly.
You use empathy to put yourself - to imagine yourself - in another person's shoes and see things from their perspective. You don't have to have knowledge of something or experience it to be able to use empathy.
This game is amazing! The writing is absolutely phenomenal and I can't stop replaying and watching the different outcomes. Good luck with the game, I'll be looking forward for updates!
I think past tense works if everything is in past tense, because then it sounds like "a long time ago..." or "once upon a time..." IMO the problem is when you mix tenses, then it's just confusing.
I'm a big fan of Young Marcus, I think both Randiel and Serialaries did a great job with it.
Thanks for reading and for such great compliment. I really tried to add replay value in different outcomes, even though my story is very chronological, point A to point B, instead of open world.
He won't. I already have 5 love interests to write and I can't add more otherwise the story will never develop. Shane is very much a part of the Haruki storyline, though.
The characters are so complex and unexpected. Haruki is incredible. Never was much into Asians. Now, I am. Was always into plain text porn. It gets you terribly hot, but this is even better. The wonderful pics of the MCs' faces are better than 1000 words, but also just enough. For the rest, fantasy does the better job. Tried text games with less pictures, but was missing something. Games with lots of pics are also nice, but this is better.
Thanks for the praise, I'm glad you liked it. I try to be very descriptive so that images are not needed. I think erotica alone is more arousing than porn photos/gifs, if done right. I hope I'm doing it right 😅
Focus on him instead of jacking off the bullies and take the blue (dom) action whenever possible with Emmit. Don't surrender to either of the bullies, as well.
Ngl, I know this is more for the kinky stuff, but I eat it up every crumb of """love""" that Marky gives to the mc. The part with Samuel was fun too, I know he problably it's not very popular but I think he's in my top 2 after Marky.
I was wondering, will we get a scene with the principal?
i feel like haruki is a good boy on the outside but when nobody is around hes a bad boy + he can kick ass...and samuel just pulls me in lol. i dont know what he did. i love fully bad/evil boys like marky but something about those two..
My ranking right now would probably be:
1 - Haruki
2 - Tyler
3 -For now i'd say Marky only since he has way more content than Samuel
Just played the new update and ahhhh it's so good!!\(^-^)/ I loved the little interaction with Tyler when you tell him you're favorite movie,both the sub and dom route in Harukis date were a masterpiece and the scene with Marky after the date was *chefs kiss*UwU<3
So, I've just completed my first playthrough (as dom as I could manage) and I am in love. I get the feeling most of the content is sub/slut focused, so I appreciate the work and creativity that've been put into the top/bully storylines. Absolutely delicious.
Time to start up a slutty sub playthrough and eagerly await future updates.
The game does start leaning more towards sub content but the latest updates have a decent 50/50 mix of sub and dom content. I'd say from chapter IV forward.
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it and also looking forward to the Emmett date.
i love this game so much, the writing is fantastic. this game just hits the spot with it's hot characters and in depth story (kinks I'm into)😉 I really can't wait for more updates, hopefully with more Marky content🥵🥵
This game is wonderful! All the characters are so memorable, especially Marky and Haruki, I'm a pretty big fan of them ;). Anyways, I love the writing, and can't wait to see where this game goes in further updates!
I Love this game so much! The Story has barely even really started and is already one of my favourites. Marky stayed in my head so long after I was aleady done playing. Super hot game, lovely writing and storytelling. The discord link doesnt work btw. Id offer myself up as a beta reader but judging by the comments on here theres already enough lol. Plese continue working on this, u are so talented <3
Thanks I joined! Marky is just the best mix of dominant and degrading. Tyler is too much latex and hardcore BDSM for me and Marky is just perfection cause hes so dominant but without all the "props" iykwim. Liked Tylers path too though dont get me wrong just totally fell in love with Marky hehe
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I hope there are those pop up gifs you get for good porn text games, I'm about to try Playing it now, wish me luck.
is there a guide?
No, although I might work on creating one if people are having trouble. Are you having trouble reaching something?
hi!, i don't think so, is just that i don't want to miss anything haha, thank you, and great job with the game
I'm on Android and get an error when I select "run game".
I downloaded the game but android doesn't open ZIP files.
Do I need to get an app to open the .zip file?
Almost all File Managers for Android open zips. Google has one, for instance. Your phone certainly has one such app.
However, to actually play a downloaded Twine game on Android, you need to use JoiPlay.
Ok thanks
Im not sure how to get past the survey, it says to hit the back button to continue playing but it eventuially takes me back to the survey :(
Pretty sure the story isn't finished yet so the survey is the creator's way of seeing what we' like to see in the future/ other feedback we might have
oh ok im dumb haha, thanks for letting me know!
Okie teensy issue; I played this game last night and i thought that Marky was a really cute name, so I said it over and over again to myself... and then remembered that it's also the name of a bus company near me.
so yeah i'm attracted to buses now (ps. I really love your game)
A Marky bus sounds like Transformers fanfiction lol
Hi author!
I love your Tyler and Marky so much. And I love to have MC "dominate" them too. Since you confirm Tyler is a hard rock, I have been daydreaming about MC Uno-reversing Marky. MC would love Marky back in the same way Marky loves him, or even more intense <3. The scene when MC returned to their room after injured Marky then kinda 'touched' him, it feels like ecstasy to me... Ahh
To think like that, I don't know if I am deranged or whatever. But one can always dream.
Thank you for your wonderful work!
Hey! Thanks for the compliments!
Yeah, Tyler is only a dom. He'd rather die than sub for someone. As for the chapter where MC starts to dominate Marky, it'll happen in the next update. I mean, you won't get to go all the way in the first time, but it'll be the beginning of it.
We're all deranged here, I'm the most deranged of them all, writing this shit lol
Hi! Big fan. I’m so sorry about your chronic pain and I know that it will be a while until the next update but can the next update be the date with Marky! ❤️ Also do you have an estimated time for it’s release?
OMG the username I cannot!
The next update is Marky's date, I'm already writing it.
I don't have a date to give. Every time I give a deadline, I always miss it. So I'd rather not give a date I'll be sure to miss.
I'd say 25% of it is done. 75% to go. I've been writing a little every day so it's going fast by my standards.
I am so shocked by myself, like, man...
I know that all characters are bullies and I usually hate bullies as I was bullied myself as a kid (but I knew what I was getting into when I started playing this game!) and out of all of them, Marky is the most typical bully... The bully that is likely familiar to all of us who were bullied.
So why the heck do I like Marky so much lol?
And what's with that hidden almost sweet (and fucked up) side he has? I was shocked when I realized that I found him endearing at one point (when he tried to be nice to MC so that he wouldn't run away again, lol), what the heck is wrong with me XD I legit wanna romance him, but I'm aware this game isn't gonna be very romantic so I'm not gonna complain.
That being said, it's a good game, I'm really looking forwards to the updates!
I was heavily bullied growing up and turned into an adult who's drawn to toxic, abusive and bullying men. So, I understand how you feel.
Marky can be nice and borderline romantic if he gets his way. But, remember, he's abusive, so he'll turn on you on a dime, as soon as you do anything wrong, and snap back into evil mode.
You'll see more of that in the game :D
I signed up, purely because this game is really good. I completed it (to where it is at the moment) quiet quickly. Wish there was more, but i do appreciate your hard work. By the way the Discord invite isnt working :(
sorry for taking long to answer, I don't check itch often
thank you for reading and for commenting ♥ it's a lot of work indeed
unfortunately discord expires invites after a while and I can't create an indefinite one. here's a new one: https://discord.gg/Aybshwq2K
also idk if i forgot but whos the red head in the cover photo
Shane. He's introduced during Haruki's date @ movie night. He's not a main character and won't have a route or anything, but he's important in Haruki's storyline.
That little Tyler daydream....don't do this to me....
New update coming in two weeks or so.
uh is there any way to turn the portraits off? i don't like how they look like (full grown adults despite still beig in school) and would like to imagine them myself
Sorry, nope.
If you really want to see the game without them, I guess you can download the game and delete the avatars manually from the folder. It'll break the image. It'll look weird but no portraits.
yall be patient their working on it + their probably taking exams and lets not forget they do have a chronic disease.
Thanks for the support 💖
i second that iv been checking this page every month
New update in roughly two weeks, k?
i beg you for more 😭
New update in roughly two weeks, k?
hi this the first time i comment on a game I just wanted to say that this game is amazing i must have played it like 10 times now my favorite character is marky I found him to be honest by far the best character in the game i hope u add more stuff about him + thx for this amazing game
Marky is arguably the most important character in the game. His "date" is not coming in the next update but he appears in both the Tyler and the Emmett dates.
Thanks for the kind words 💕
Hey, I'm sorry to bother, but the discord link offered in the game isn't working and I think it may have expired. If that's not the case then I apologize, but I thought I'd bring it up just in case.
Here's a link to the Discord, https://discord.gg/KNhuW5MJNv . :)
wow
The author, please let me hug by the way tell me what time can update
Thanks for reading.
Update is gonna take a while still. I don't have a date to give. I'm working on it.
I so wish this was already finished. I can’t put it down. And enough said but where can I find someone like Haruki?
If you figure it out, tell me because I want one too ;D
...This is the second "fully M/M" game I've seen with a straight protagonist. What is that about? Who is this for? Who would want that?
He's not straight. He's figuring himself out, in self-denial, going through gay guilt. A lot of gays feel like this growing up, I certainly did. So his narration is going to reflect said denial.
Uh... how old is the MC? If he's over 18 he's had plenty of time to figure things out...
This is absolutely not relatable to me whatsoever... to the point that I could not even imagine the possibility of it and just assumed he is straight... So, in any case, this game is definitely not for me. Can't put myself in the MC's shoes because I cannot comprehend whatever he's feeling.
That's ok. Not every game is for everyone.
MC is based on me and a ton of people had that same experience.
Also, have you met closeted gay men? A gazillion of them are over 18, a lot of them middle aged and even (unhappily) married to women.
Maybe try to use empathy to see other points of view instead of assuming every experience should be exactly like yours.
I'm glad you have it all figured out. A lot of us haven't.
Uh yeah, plenty of gay men are in the closet... what does that have to do with anything?
How the fuck can I use empathy to see something I have no knowledge of? What the fuck? You are insane.
And yes, I definitely have it all figured out. Not hard when, you know, sexual attraction is an involuntary physical response that does not require figuring out. Literally all you need to do is not be paralyzed. But I dunno, maybe you are paralyzed.
Wow, you're really toxic. I was questioning well into my 20's because what society was telling me I should feel as bi wasn't what I was feeling at all. Who are you to say how people should navigate this? Who are you to judge how others navigate this?
they don't mean you in particular for being unable to understand how the MC feels and how comfortable he is with his sexuality, everyone here is glad you have yourself figured out and we hope you stay in a situation where you can be yourself openly, but you are not every gay person. a lot of gay men and women don't realize they like the same gender until very late in life because of how they were raised or who raised them or who they were raised around. back when I was a minor I constantly thought that I knew nothing about myself because I was a minor and that what I was interested in might change when I grew up and or I might be straighter than a needle, spoiler alert, I never did, and also on the main topic about why most M/M games have "straight" MC is so it can relatable to those who still don't know themselves and wouldn't mind exploring via real life experience, or virtual ones. some games ignore it because it's not everyone, some games add it because it's not everyone.
What the heck man?
It's really cool that you've got it all figured out and we're all seriously happy for you - and we support that! No one should feel guilty or scared because of their sexuality, but unfortunately so many of us still are, due to the way we grew up, things we were taught or people we were around.
But what you wrote is so narrow-minded!
"If he's over 18 he's had plenty of time to figure things out", seriously? Do you believe that, like, by the age of 18, you gotta have yourself figured out? That's so wrong, because 18 is so young and you're basically just starting to explore life freely. Like, I believed I was asexual until not so long ago and it took me so much time to accept that and to stop trying to force myself to change. Only to realize in my middle twenties that I'm, well, not so asexual. And I'm STILL not even sure where I fit exactly.
You use empathy to put yourself - to imagine yourself - in another person's shoes and see things from their perspective. You don't have to have knowledge of something or experience it to be able to use empathy.
This game is amazing! The writing is absolutely phenomenal and I can't stop replaying and watching the different outcomes. Good luck with the game, I'll be looking forward for updates!
Agree, the writing is exceptional. Definitely a talent.
Oh, and thanks it's in present tense! E.g. Young Markus TOG is in past tense which often feels wrong.
I think past tense works if everything is in past tense, because then it sounds like "a long time ago..." or "once upon a time..." IMO the problem is when you mix tenses, then it's just confusing.
I'm a big fan of Young Marcus, I think both Randiel and Serialaries did a great job with it.
Thanks for reading and for such great compliment. I really tried to add replay value in different outcomes, even though my story is very chronological, point A to point B, instead of open world.
Is there a possible chance that Shane could be a love intrest? Cuz I kinda like him to be added than just a background character.
He won't. I already have 5 love interests to write and I can't add more otherwise the story will never develop. Shane is very much a part of the Haruki storyline, though.
Coolest game ever.
The characters are so complex and unexpected. Haruki is incredible. Never was much into Asians. Now, I am. Was always into plain text porn. It gets you terribly hot, but this is even better. The wonderful pics of the MCs' faces are better than 1000 words, but also just enough. For the rest, fantasy does the better job. Tried text games with less pictures, but was missing something. Games with lots of pics are also nice, but this is better.
Can't wait for more content.
Thanks for the praise, I'm glad you liked it. I try to be very descriptive so that images are not needed. I think erotica alone is more arousing than porn photos/gifs, if done right. I hope I'm doing it right 😅
Haruki best boi
This Haruki/MC/Marky triangle is SO GOOD, if you go back to Marky's room after the Haruki movie date. 😍
glad you liked it.
Marky's little outburst was fun to write.
new update when?
at least a couple of months
is it gonna be a big update?
It will feature the Emmett and Tyler dates. Probably double the size of the last one.
Emmett was supposed to be released along with Haruki but I had writer's block at the time, not knowing what to do with him.
I'm not blocked anymore. I know what to do with Emmett. My life is just crazy right now, so barely any time for writing.
how do i get emmit to view me as a dom?
Focus on him instead of jacking off the bullies and take the blue (dom) action whenever possible with Emmit. Don't surrender to either of the bullies, as well.
the most important choice is during chapter IV, in the bathroom, you have to Find A Way Out Yourself (blue choice)
new update when
at least a couple of months
Glad to see this working again,great
YES I FINALLY GET TO BE DOMINANT
Ngl, I know this is more for the kinky stuff, but I eat it up every crumb of """love""" that Marky gives to the mc. The part with Samuel was fun too, I know he problably it's not very popular but I think he's in my top 2 after Marky.
I was wondering, will we get a scene with the principal?
Marky loves MC in his own way. He just has a psychotic way of showing it UwU
And there'll be sex with the principal, yes. It'll take a little while though. Only after I finish all dates.
Man i love samuel and haruki...
So you like the goodest boys instead of the evilest ones
i feel like haruki is a good boy on the outside but when nobody is around hes a bad boy + he can kick ass...and samuel just pulls me in lol. i dont know what he did. i love fully bad/evil boys like marky but something about those two..
My ranking right now would probably be:
1 - Haruki
2 - Tyler
3 -For now i'd say Marky only since he has way more content than Samuel
3.5 - Samuel
5. Emmett (no hard feelings)
I can't wait for the next update , really looking forward to see what happens if I choose marky at the movies
I'm excited to get there too. He's the one I love to write the most lol
Just played the new update and ahhhh it's so good!!\(^-^)/ I loved the little interaction with Tyler when you tell him you're favorite movie,both the sub and dom route in Harukis date were a masterpiece and the scene with Marky after the date was *chefs kiss*UwU<3
Thanks for the compliment!
I also loved writing the Marky scene at the end of Haruki's date. It's always fun to write that psycho.
Things are different if you picked Tyler before :0
Bold of you to assume that I haven't replayed every single route 15 times already OwO
So, I've just completed my first playthrough (as dom as I could manage) and I am in love. I get the feeling most of the content is sub/slut focused, so I appreciate the work and creativity that've been put into the top/bully storylines. Absolutely delicious.
Time to start up a slutty sub playthrough and eagerly await future updates.
I'm also really looking forward to the Emmett movie date because I just love bullying that adorable nerd.
The game does start leaning more towards sub content but the latest updates have a decent 50/50 mix of sub and dom content. I'd say from chapter IV forward.
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it and also looking forward to the Emmett date.
love this game.
Brother, why did you rate the bloody basketball game one star???
Brother, why did you rate the bloody basketball game one star???
Wen will the hext update xome out?
I don't have a date to give, but I'm working on it. I don't like to give dates because every time I do, I miss the deadline.
OK thank you
i love this game so much, the writing is fantastic. this game just hits the spot with it's hot characters and in depth story (kinks I'm into)😉 I really can't wait for more updates, hopefully with more Marky content🥵🥵
Thank you for the compliment ♥ More Marky is for sure coming.
I don't know exactly when the next update is coming. I'm a bit stuck with a certain scene.
This game is wonderful! All the characters are so memorable, especially Marky and Haruki, I'm a pretty big fan of them ;). Anyways, I love the writing, and can't wait to see where this game goes in further updates!
thanks! I'm so glad you like my characters. my effort at characterization is coming through haha
the next update is 65% done I'd say.
tiny spoiler: it's movie night at St. Agnes
I Love this game so much! The Story has barely even really started and is already one of my favourites. Marky stayed in my head so long after I was aleady done playing. Super hot game, lovely writing and storytelling. The discord link doesnt work btw. Id offer myself up as a beta reader but judging by the comments on here theres already enough lol. Plese continue working on this, u are so talented <3
Thanks for the high praise!
Marky is my favorite character, I understand your obsession with him hahaha
It's so cool knowing others like something I made.
As for the discord link, it only lasts 7 days for some reason. So here it is again:
https://discord.gg/nYuy8hhW
Thanks I joined! Marky is just the best mix of dominant and degrading. Tyler is too much latex and hardcore BDSM for me and Marky is just perfection cause hes so dominant but without all the "props" iykwim. Liked Tylers path too though dont get me wrong just totally fell in love with Marky hehe